#26
Posted: 07/05/2007 16:29
kad si vec krenula da kritikujes...onda da analiziramo tvoje...Princess Fiona wrote:evo jos malo ispravljeno…![]()
"Tell your heart that the fear of suffering is worse than the suffering itself. And that no heart has ever suffered when it goes in search of its dreams because every second of the search is a second's encounter with God and with eternity..." (Paulo Coelho)
ovo boldirano je..bas onako djeciji prevod...za 8 razred. "when it goes in search"....bukvalno, od rijeci do rijeci...
a ovo "second's" ti znaci nesto drugo, i odnosi se na sekundu...a ne na srce...sto je u tekstu.
We all go through different stages of transitions and transformations, always knowing that somewhere has to be a place for us! Sometimes we need a great deal of time to understand who we are and where we really belong. It is rather difficult to find a way alone, that’s why there are other people to show us the path, in one way or another. You are [A] truly [TRUE] inspiration for a [ili the] young actress whose life without the stage lights would not have a purpose. "posljednja recenica, red rijeci...ponovo, kao da koristis nasu sintaksu sa engleskim rijecima"
"somewhere" - red rijeci u recenici.
You are [A] true inspiration ili you are truly [an] inspiration...
Whatever my dreams were, how they changed through [the] time and what they’ll become… Thank you, for everything that you are and you’ve been giving. [you give]
This is for you…